[Grammar] Power outage

[MAJSH]

The Back-UPS in our office is completely out of order and it is no longer support.
We are experiencing frequent power outage in our office especially during the summer season. Since there is overload circuit, the current service line is not able to hold the increasing power threshold, so the main isolator is tripping off frequently. Therefore, please arrange for a proper replace immediately; otherwise, it will impact on our servers, computers and other electronic related devices in the office.


Please advise me on whether the sentences above are grammatically worded.

Thank you

 

[Charlie Bernstein]

The backups in our office are completely out of order, and there is no longer support.

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We are experiencing frequent power outages in our office, especially during the summer [STRIKE]season[/STRIKE]. Since there is a ciruit breaker, the current service line cannot handle surges [STRIKE]the increasing power threshold[/STRIKE], so the main isolator is tripping [STRIKE]off[/STRIKE] frequently. Therefore, please arrange for a proper replacement immediately. Otherwise, it will affect our servers, computers, and other electronic [STRIKE]related[/STRIKE] devices in the office.

Please advise me on whether the sentences above are grammatical[STRIKE]ly worded[/STRIKE].
Thank you.

You're welcome.