[General] plz currect my application i write for my daughter school late joining

[Hasnain Raza]

LEAVE APPLICATION
The Principal,
Fatimiyah (Girls) Education Network
Karachi.

Respectfull Madam,
This is to inform you that my daughter Fatima Class IV Section B GR NO 5088 Will be absent from the school on the following dates 1[SUP]st[/SUP] August to 9[SUP]th[/SUP] August due to out of city.

I request that leave of absence may be granted.

Thank you,

 

[tedmc]

Dear Madam/Ms xxx,

I would like to seek your kind approval for my daughter, Fatima (full name?) of Class IC Section B, to be absent from class from 1 Aug to 9 Aug as our family will be away. (What do you mean by "out of city"?).