[Grammar] plz check this verse and correct

[prasaddanushka]

My sorrows,happiness and lots of things,i shared with you. So i feel you as my own sister than a best friend . i have a request on you.Be my own sister in next born.

 

[doteyescrossts]

We've been through a lot...You are more than my best friend now; you are my sister. If I could have just one thing, I'd want you to be my sister in the next life.