mydream604
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I have a lot of grammar errors in my writing, but I don't know anyone who English is good enough to read my writing for me so I have to look for help here. Below if my summary.Please help, thank you.
Volunteering DOES A BODY GOOD.
In "Volunteering Does a Body Good," Angela Haupt states that the return for someone who helps others is he or she will forget his or her own stress and depress. According to Haupt, when someone helps other people, that person will forget his or her own problems and it is believed as a new science. Haupt also refers to a variety of studies that suggest people who do volunteer work have better health, less tress, longer lives and well-being. According to Haupt, volunteering especially beneficial to adults 65 and older. Volunteering enhances seniors' social networks and helps them stay active in the community. However, Haupt states that only the effective volunteer programs can benefit volunteers. In conclusion, people will receive more than what they give when they help other people.
Volunteering DOES A BODY GOOD.
In "Volunteering Does a Body Good," Angela Haupt states that the return for someone who helps others is he or she will forget his or her own stress and depress. According to Haupt, when someone helps other people, that person will forget his or her own problems and it is believed as a new science. Haupt also refers to a variety of studies that suggest people who do volunteer work have better health, less tress, longer lives and well-being. According to Haupt, volunteering especially beneficial to adults 65 and older. Volunteering enhances seniors' social networks and helps them stay active in the community. However, Haupt states that only the effective volunteer programs can benefit volunteers. In conclusion, people will receive more than what they give when they help other people.