learning54
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Hi teachers,
Are there any mistakes in my paragraph? Is it well constructed?
Title: Caroline's birthday. The whole thing happens in Wilton. It is just part of a reading.
Now Sharon is ringing the doorbell at the Wilsons’ house and Kate is with her. Sharon knows Caroline because she often travels to Wilton and Sharon’s aunt lives very near the Wilsons.
Should I change 'at the Wilson's house' to 'of the Wilson's house'?
Thanks in advance.
Are there any mistakes in my paragraph? Is it well constructed?
Title: Caroline's birthday. The whole thing happens in Wilton. It is just part of a reading.
Now Sharon is ringing the doorbell at the Wilsons’ house and Kate is with her. Sharon knows Caroline because she often travels to Wilton and Sharon’s aunt lives very near the Wilsons.
Should I change 'at the Wilson's house' to 'of the Wilson's house'?
Thanks in advance.
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