[Essay] Please point out errors of the given paragraph

[Faisal Marri]

Please point out the errors.

Better alone than in bad company

A man is known for company he keeps, says the pithy maxim. Surely, world judges everyone on face value. If someone is in good fellows, it is because his friends are good and vice versa. But the problem is, the story goes on beyond this peculiar fact. In fact, bad company ruins a person on every side. It demolishes his character and behaviour. As man is the most habit carrying creature, he adopts the features of his favourites unintentionally if not, intentionally. If his friends are frequent liars, soon, he too will be better enough because human beings naturally are humane. They are more merciful, loving and love-seeking. They tend to do good rather bad. No doubt good company is better than being alone.

 

[teechar]

Please point out the errors.

Better alone than in bad company

A man is known for company he keeps, says the pithy maxim. Surely, world judges everyone on face value. If someone is in good fellows, it is because his friends are good and vice versa. But the problem is, the story goes on beyond this peculiar fact. In fact, bad company ruins a person on every side. It demolishes his character and behaviour. As man is the most habit carrying creature, he adopts the features of his favourites unintentionally if not, intentionally. If his friends are frequent liars, soon, he too will be better enough because human beings naturally are humane. They are more merciful, loving and love-seeking. They tend to do good rather bad. No doubt good company is better than being alone.

This is incoherent and almost incomprehensible. Please rewrite it in clear and simple language.