Please listen guys I won't take much of your time.

[tufguy]

Please listen guys I won't take much of your time.

Please check my sentence.

 

[Rover_KE]

It's incorrectly punctuated.

 

[Matthew Wai]

I think it is a run-on sentence according to https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Run-on_sentence

 

[tufguy]

Please listen guys. I won't take much of your time.

 

[Tdol]

Please listen, guys.