[Grammar] Please help me check the two sentences.

[summyang]

Hello everyone, I am new to the site and I am so glad that some English experts can help me with my poor English.
First of all, Shall I say "Please help me check the following two sentences", "Please help me check the two sentences" or "Please help me check following sentences"? Actually, I am always confused that if "the" and "two" can work together.

I am working on my paper and I hope someone can help me with the following sentences,

1, ** played a role as internal auditor to add value, improve company's operations and (to) help company accomplish objectives.

2, ** was responsible to prepare payroll, journal entries, bankreconciliations, and (to) assist manager with financial statements.

3, ** was responsible to prepare monthly budget and(to) analyze variation between the budget and actual result.

Please check the words with red color. Do I need to use those words in my sentences?

Thank you so much

 

[Grumpy]

Hello everyone, I am new to the site and I am so glad that some English experts can help me with my poor English.
First of all, Shall I say "Please help me check the following three sentences", "[STRIKE]Please help me check the two sentences"[/STRIKE] or "Please help me check the following sentences"? Actually, I am always confused [STRIKE]that if[/STRIKE] about whether "the" and "two" can work together.

I am working on my paper and I hope someone can help me with the following sentences,

1, ** played a role as an internal auditor to add value, to improve the company's operations and to help the company accomplish its objectives.

2, ** was responsible [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] for preparing the payroll, and for journal entries, bank reconciliations, and [STRIKE](to) [/STRIKE]assisting the manager with financial statements.

3, ** was responsible [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] for preparing the monthly budget and [STRIKE](to) [/STRIKE] for analyzing any variation between the budget and the actual result.

Please check the words with red color. Do I need to use those words in my sentences?

Thank you so much

See my corrections above.

 

[summyang]

Grumpy, Thank you so much for your help.
Now, I have learned how to write those sentences in my paper.
I will keep working on my English because it is so fine to learn something new.