[General] Please edit my writing letter and say my mistakes

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hamidd2

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[FONT=&quot]Dear mr.sayad,[/FONT]​
[FONT=&quot] [/FONT]​
[FONT=&quot]I am influenced by your new satelite reciever[/FONT]​
[FONT=&quot]I Would like to know more about the prices and types and discounts the seller offer[/FONT]​
[FONT=&quot]Considering hd-tv , what do you suggest?[/FONT]​
[FONT=&quot]Could you send a catalogue and offer competitive price [/FONT]​
[FONT=&quot]I would like to make a decision on this soon,due to fact that I'd appreciate an early reply.[/FONT]​
[FONT=&quot]Yours faithfully[/FONT]
 
You can edit your post and improve it a great deal by noting the following:

- Put a space after a comma.
- Proper nouns should be capitalised.

Edit your first post using those rules and then we can have another look.
 
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