Please edit my CV

[guest24]

Hi

Kindly edit my CV for me please.

 

[teechar]

Instead of attaching your CV, you should actually post the contents that you want looked at. That way, other people can benefit from reading the corrections/suggestions too. ;-)

 

[guest24]

Name & surname*
Personal information****** I'd no:* .........
Home Language:* Xhosa*
Other language:* English, Afrikaans, Sotho and Tswana*Speak,read, write and understand*
Religion:* Christian*
Citizenship:** South Africa
Nationality:** African*
Driver’s license: Learners Licence(code10)
Personal Profile****** I am a hard worker, responsible and take full pride in what I do.
I am up for any challenge, very passionate in what I do and work well with others. I am able to express myself in my work. I am creative and always willing to learn more. I am expressive and outgoing person who is very eager and determined in everything I do.

Education*
**
2006-2010*Krugersdorp High School (matriculated) Grade 12(2010)
Compulsory subjects English,Afrikaans,Mathematics Core and Life Orientation
Choice subjects Geography,Physical Science and Engineering Graphics and Design
2012 - name of College*
Course: IT programming
Duration: one year*
Modules(First Semester)
Computer Hardware, Nwork Engineering, Java Programming and Database
Second semester*
Web Technology, System Software, IT and project management and E-Commerce

2013 - name of college*
Duration: 3 months(January- March)
Course: Boilermaking*
Subjects Mathematics, Engineering Science, Platerms Theory,and planters and structural drawings (N2)

2013 - 2014* Name of college
Duration: One year
*Course: Social Auxiliary Worker NQF Level 4

Modules

*(M1) The Foindation of Social Welfare South Africa
(M2) Nature,Purpose, Scope, Foundation and Principles of Social Auxiliary Work
*(M3) Judicial System legIslation Impacting on the Social Auxiliary Work / Social Work
(M4) Human Behaviour, Relationship Systems and Social Issues
(M5) Population at Risk, Social Prolems and Special Needs
(M6) Social Welfare Resources
(M7)* Social Auxiliary Work Methods & Techniques: Working with Individuals and Families,*
(M8) Social Auxiliary Work Methods & Techniques: Working with Groups (M9), Social Auxiliary Work Methods & Techniques: Working with Communities*
(M10), Understanding Social Auxiliary Work Administration

Qualifications**

GET level 4 certificate (Grade 9) Computer Literacy Krugersdorp High School*2007-2010*Call Centre Certificate FET Certificate: Social Auxiliary Work*

Work Experience

*Company: Mo-tseleng Marketing
Period: started February 2011- end June 2011
*Position: promoter

Company: Company name
Period: June 2011(one month)
Position: sales lady

Company: Company Name
Period: started August 2011 - end June 2012*
Position: promoter

Company: Company name
Period: started July 2012 - end September 2012*
Position: Promoter

Company: Company name
Period: started December 2012- end April 2013
*Position: Promoter

Community Service

Harvest Aid, Polokego in Krugersdorp, Emily Jordan House, Kissing Learning Centre, Pietermaritzburg Mental Health Society, Sinomlando and Gay and Lesbian Network

Hobbies**

Reading, cooking, listening to music and playing sports*

Reference

Name: Name and Surname*
Position: Social Worker****
Organization: Name of Organization****
Contact details: contact details

Name: Name and Surname*
Position: Owner of Kitsong Learning
Organization: Kitsong Learning Centre****
Contact details: contact details**

Name: Name and Surname*
Position: Customer Service Association*****
Company: Company name
Contact details: contact details

 

[teechar]

Name & surname*
Personal information****** I'd no:* .........
[STRIKE]Home[/STRIKE]Mother Language:* Xhosa*
Other language:* English, Afrikaans, Sotho and Tswana* speak, read, write and understand*
Religion:* Christian*
Citizenship:** South African
Nationality:** African*
Driver’s license: Learners Licence (code10)
Personal Profile****** I am a hard worker, responsible and take full pride in my work. [STRIKE]what I do.[/STRIKE]
I [STRIKE]am up for any[/STRIKE] welcome a challenge; I'm very passionate in what I do and work well with others. I am able to express myself clearly. [STRIKE]in my work.[/STRIKE] I am creative and always willing to learn more. [STRIKE]I am expressive and outgoing person who is very eager and determined in everything I do.
[/STRIKE]
Education*
**
2006-2010*Krugersdorp High School (matriculated) Grade 12 (2010)
Compulsory subjects: English,Afrikaans,Mathematics Core and Life Orientation
[STRIKE] Choice subjects[/STRIKE] Electives: Geography,Physical Science and Engineering Graphics and Design
2012 - name of College*
Course: IT programming
Duration: one year*
Modules(First Semester)
Computer Hardware, Network Engineering, Java Programming and Databases
Second semester*
Web Technology, System Software, IT and project management and E-Commerce

2013 - name of college*
Duration: 3 months(January- March)
Course: Boilermaking*
Subjects Mathematics, Engineering Science, Platerms Theory, and planters and structural drawings (N2)

2013 - 2014* Name of college
Duration: One year
*Course: Social Auxiliary Worker NQF Level 4

Modules

*(M1) The Foundation of Social Welfare South Africa
(M2) Nature, Purpose, Scope, Foundation and Principles of Social Auxiliary Work
*(M3) Judicial System legislation Impacting on the Social Auxiliary Work / Social Work
(M4) Human Behaviour, Relationship Systems and Social Issues
(M5) Populations at Risk, Social Problems and Special Needs
(M6) Social Welfare Resources
(M7)* Social Auxiliary Work Methods & Techniques: Working with Individuals and Families,*
(M8) Social Auxiliary Work Methods & Techniques: Working with Groups (M9), Social Auxiliary Work Methods & Techniques: Working with Communities*
(M10), Understanding Social Auxiliary Work Administration

Qualifications**

GET level-4 certificate (Grade 9) Computer Literacy Krugersdorp High School*2007-2010*Call Centre Certificate FET Certificate: Social Auxiliary Work*

Work Experience

*Company: Mo-tseleng Marketing
Period: [STRIKE]started[/STRIKE] February 2011- [STRIKE]end[/STRIKE] June 2011
*Position: promoter

Company: Company name
Period: June 2011 (one month)
Position: sales lady

Company: Company Name
Period: [STRIKE]started[/STRIKE] August 2011 - [STRIKE]end[/STRIKE] June 2012*
Position: promoter

Company: Company name
Period: [STRIKE]started[/STRIKE] July 2012 - [STRIKE]end[/STRIKE] September 2012*
Position: Promoter

Company: Company name
Period: [STRIKE]started[/STRIKE] December 2012- [STRIKE]end[/STRIKE] April 2013
*Position: Promoter

Community Service
Volunteered with:
Harvest Aid, Polokego in Krugersdorp, Emily Jordan House, Kissing Learning Centre, Pietermaritzburg Mental Health Society, Sinomlando and Gay and Lesbian Network

Hobbies**

Reading, cooking, listening to music and playing sports*

References

Name: Name and Surname*
Position: Social Worker****
Organization: Name of Organization****
Contact details: contact details

Name: Name and Surname*
Position: Owner of Kitsong Learning
Organization: Kitsong Learning Centre****
Contact details: contact details**

Name: Name and Surname*
Position: Customer Service Association*****
Company: Company name
Contact details: contact details

I could not understand the text highlighted in red. Also, I did not bother looking at the formatting. I'm sure you can organize your CV to your liking on your word processor.

 

[emsr2d2]

"I'd no" should be "ID no". I think your auto-correct probably changed it to "I'd" and you didn't notice.

 

[bubbha]

Different countries and cultures have different conventions, but in the US, at least, we don't generally include religion. I was unaware that this would be a convention in South Africa.

 

[emsr2d2]

In the UK, most of the top section would be unnecessary. We give our full name, address, email address and contact telephone number. That's it. We no longer generally mention our gender or age. I don't think a British CV has ever included religion.

I would mention what languages I speak only if it were relevant to the job. The same goes for whether I have a full driving licence or not. I wouldn't mention my nationality (citizenship in AmE) on a CV. Some jobs require you to be a particular nationality and if that's the case, the specific question would probably be asked on the formal application form.