toxic girl
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- Joined
- Apr 21, 2012
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- Native Language
- English
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
hello ,im happy that i can use your ideas
i have a paragraph please help me and first highlight my errors (sentences, grammar, mechanics, and formatting)and then write the correct it and a little explain to me thanks a lot.
thea musgrave
1 may2012
The student and the road to writing well
sara is a good student she know that most of the process of writting is re-writing ,so for each assignment he schedule plenty of time for studding, thinking, and writing .last week , for example ,he use his skills when she need to wrote a assignment for his EFL course .she think a bout the topic , planed carefully , and then began to wrote .she check the instructions from time to time. because he knew that she must not forgetting them as her ideas developed .sara worked back and forth between his outline and her draft , always thinking a bout the organization of his ideas .when she finish writting ,corrected errors of sentence structure , grammar ,mechanics ,and formatting .sent the assignment to she tutor on the due date .to celebrate , she make a cup of tea and read a novel ,then went for a walk
i have a paragraph please help me and first highlight my errors (sentences, grammar, mechanics, and formatting)and then write the correct it and a little explain to me thanks a lot.
thea musgrave
1 may2012
The student and the road to writing well
sara is a good student she know that most of the process of writting is re-writing ,so for each assignment he schedule plenty of time for studding, thinking, and writing .last week , for example ,he use his skills when she need to wrote a assignment for his EFL course .she think a bout the topic , planed carefully , and then began to wrote .she check the instructions from time to time. because he knew that she must not forgetting them as her ideas developed .sara worked back and forth between his outline and her draft , always thinking a bout the organization of his ideas .when she finish writting ,corrected errors of sentence structure , grammar ,mechanics ,and formatting .sent the assignment to she tutor on the due date .to celebrate , she make a cup of tea and read a novel ,then went for a walk