Please correct my letter

[poongodi]

Dear Sir,
I have worked on 06/08/2017(Sunday ) for data merger activity at Ambur.So I request you to credit the holiday working allowance into my account.

 

[teechar]

Dear Sir,

I [STRIKE]have[/STRIKE] worked on 06/08/2017 (Sunday) [STRIKE]for[/STRIKE] on a data-merger project in [STRIKE]activity at[/STRIKE] Ambur. [STRIKE]So I request you to[/STRIKE] Please credit [STRIKE]the holiday working allowance into[/STRIKE] my leave accordingly. [STRIKE]account.[/STRIKE]

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[poongodi]

No it's not about crediting leave. We will be paid by the allowance for working on holidays

 

[teechar]

Change the second sentence to:
Please lodge the payment (holiday pay rate) to my bank account.