please check this paragraph

[robin lee]

i want to send an email to thank my co-worker: Thank you.


Mary, thank you for your offer to help. I will speak to my boss about it so in the meanwhile, please hold off talking to our manager.

 

[albertino]

i want to send an email to thank my co-worker: Thank you.


Mary, thank you very much for your offer to help. But I will tell my boss about it myself. So, please don't bother to do it for me at the moment.

(Not a teacher)

 

[Barb_D]

Is "my boss" the same person as "our manager"?

 

[Anu18]

Hi to all

I am going to send a letter to Insurance Office about My New postal Address.
Please help me with correcting grammars.

My Letter Contains:
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[FONT=&quot]To,[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot][/FONT][FONT=&quot][/FONT]
Office Address[FONT=&quot]
.......
[/FONT] [FONT=&quot]Insurance Policy No.: [/FONT][FONT=&quot]1563535/03[/FONT][FONT=&quot][/FONT]
[FONT=&quot] [/FONT]
Dear Sir/Madam,

I have recently moved and I would like to change my address. My details are as follows:

[FONT=&quot][/FONT]Previous Address:

Old Postal Address Details


Present Address:
Current Postal Address Details.
I respectfully request you to change my address in your records for further communications.
Finally, I did not get the any letters from the Office. The second letter dispatched on March 2010. I hold that at my old address till May 10, 2010.If it is possible. please, resend the letter in above mention address.

I am waiting for mail/letter in new address.
[FONT=&quot]Thank You.[/FONT] [FONT=&quot][/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Sincerely[/FONT]
abc
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