Please check these sentences.

[rock-onn]

In the book of proverbs, talking too much is considered bad, and it indirectly declares that people who talks too much are fools.

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[Rover_KE]

I have changed your thread title. Can you see why? It originally said

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[emsr2d2]

How to make this sentence better?

I think you've been here long enough to know that we don't start questions with "How to ..."