keannu
VIP Member
- Joined
- Dec 27, 2010
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Korean
- Home Country
- South Korea
- Current Location
- South Korea
Source : self practice
[FONT=바]Even though overtime has the bright side, it reduces your personal time/private time with their family. I think family bond/fellowship is very important. People always need recharging. If you work overtime too much, you'll get exhausted/drained/fatigued, which can also affect your health. [/FONT]
1. personal time/private time
It seems "personal time" is paid vacation related to work, while "private time" is your leisurely time away from work. Which is appropriate for the context?
2. bond/fellowship - fellowship seems to be for groups except families. So is "bond" the only option in the context?
3. Is "affect your health" appropriate?
[FONT=바]Even though overtime has the bright side, it reduces your personal time/private time with their family. I think family bond/fellowship is very important. People always need recharging. If you work overtime too much, you'll get exhausted/drained/fatigued, which can also affect your health. [/FONT]
1. personal time/private time
It seems "personal time" is paid vacation related to work, while "private time" is your leisurely time away from work. Which is appropriate for the context?
2. bond/fellowship - fellowship seems to be for groups except families. So is "bond" the only option in the context?
3. Is "affect your health" appropriate?