, perfect for owners

[theol]

I am a dog. I am very playful, so I am fun to play with, perfect for owners who are playful.

Is the second sentence correct?

 

[emsr2d2]

I am a dog. I am very playful, so I am fun to play with, and [I'm] perfect for owners who are playful like to play.

Is the second sentence correct?

Look at my changes above. I've noticed in all your threads that you like to list several attributes, separating them with commas but you always forget to put "and" before the final one. You need to work on that.

Also, you need to avoid so much repetition. In your second sentence you had "playful", "play" and "playful". That's too much. Come up with some synonyms.