People started to walk out

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Bassim

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People started to walk out after a few minutes of Kevin's lecture, which made him regret accepting the invitation to ever come to this university, where left-wing liberals openly pushed their agenda. As he went on with his lecture, a thought occurred to him that he had walked into the nest of vipers, who would have no qualm about biting him to death.They didn't want to hear his opinions about immigration, crime in deprived areas and drug abuse among minorities. Kevin felt their eyes burning into him, but he was undeterred. He was going to present the facts no matter how unpleasant they were.
 
Have I made any mistakes?

People started to walk out after a few minutes of Kevin's lecture, which made him regret accepting the invitation to ever come to this university, where left-wing liberals openly pushed their agenda. As he went on with his lecture, a thought occurred to him that he had walked into a nest of vipers, who would have no qualms about biting him to death.They didn't want to hear his opinions about immigration, crime in deprived areas and drug abuse among minorities. Kevin felt their eyes burning into him, but he was undeterred. He was going to present the facts no matter how unpleasant they were.

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