Paul went out with Diana on many occasions

Status
Not open for further replies.

Bassim

VIP Member
Joined
Mar 1, 2008
Member Type
Student or Learner
Native Language
Bosnian
Home Country
Bosnia Herzegovina
Current Location
Sweden
Have I made any mistakes?

Paul went out with Diana on many occasions but didn't make any pass at her for fear of turning her away. She was a shy and insecure, and Paul was careful and didn't press on although he wished to smother her in kisses more than anything in the world.
 
Delete 'a'.
 
How about a comma before although?
 
Status
Not open for further replies.

Ask a Teacher

If you have a question about the English language and would like to ask one of our many English teachers and language experts, please click the button below to let us know:

(Requires Registration)
Back
Top