constantinusphilo
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This is a paragraph from The Sheltering Sky by Paul Bowles:
Beyond that the people and animals disappeared into darkness. The bus stopped with a jolt and the driver got out abruptly and walked away with the air of wishing to have nothing further to do with it. Passengers still slept, or yawned and began looking about for their belongings, most of which were no longer in the places where they had put them the night before.
I think he should have used 'the passengers' instead of just 'passengers', because it is situationally determined.
Beyond that the people and animals disappeared into darkness. The bus stopped with a jolt and the driver got out abruptly and walked away with the air of wishing to have nothing further to do with it. Passengers still slept, or yawned and began looking about for their belongings, most of which were no longer in the places where they had put them the night before.
I think he should have used 'the passengers' instead of just 'passengers', because it is situationally determined.
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