Part three. A description of a picture. Please everyone check it.

[Lê Thiên Hoàng]

He is middle-aged. He is wearing the green apron , shirt, and blown tie and hearing on the phone. He is holding a "milk bottle" on his right hand. He is feeding milk to a baby on his thigh.(I don't sure this sentence. Maybe that's wrong).

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[Matthew Wai]

Re: Part three. A decription a picture. Please everyone check it.

'A middle-aged man is on the phone wearing a shirt and a dark brown tie under a green apron. At the same time, he is holding a bottle in his right hand, feeding milk to a baby on his lap.'

 

[tedmc]

Re: Part three. A decription a picture. Please everyone check it.

Good exercise in descriptive writing.

The picture shows a middle-aged man wearing a grey shirt and a dark brown tie with an apron over, sitting on a chair talking on the phone. He is holding the handset with his left hand while feeding a baby sitting on his lap with his right hand with a milk bottle.

 

[emsr2d2]

Re: Part three. A decription a picture. Please everyone check it.

I would omit "At the same time" from Matthew's alternate version. It's a still photo so everything must be happening at the same time.

 

[Rover_KE]

Re: Part three. A decription a picture. Please everyone check it.

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Lê Thiên Hoàng, please note my amendments to your thread title in post #1.

 

[Matthew Wai]

I [STRIKE]don't[/STRIKE] am not sure about this sentence.

I am not a teacher.

 

[Lê Thiên Hoàng]

Re: Part three. A decription a picture. Please everyone check it.

Good exercise in descriptive writing.

The picture shows a middle-aged man wearing a grey shirt and a dark brown tie with an apron over, sitting on a chair talking on the phone. He is holding the handset with his left hand while feeding a baby sitting on his lap with his right hand with a milk bottle.

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So my sentence is grammatical. Is it correct?. Why don't I see the red text(except "I don't ...)?