palm

[Do228]

Is this text OK or do I need to rephrase it?

Five Chinese chicks were sitting under a palm doing nothing. Unfortunately the most beautiful one got hit by a coconut that fell down on her head, causing a fatal injury.

 

[GeneD]

Don't ever read this guy's posts while drinking or eating. It was a blast if you see what I mean.
:up: :lol:

 

[Tdol]

Do you have a reason to use chicks?

 

[emsr2d2]

This is what I imagined when I read your post.



I was understandably very upset to discover that the most beautiful one (they're all gorgeous!) had been killed by a falling coconut.

 

[Raymott]

Is this text OK or do I need to rephrase it?

"Unfortunately the most beautiful one got hit by a coconut that fell down on her head, causing a fatal injury."

"Unfortunately, the most beautiful one was killed by a falling coconut."

 

[Tdol]

Would it have been less of a tragedy if a less attractive person had been killed?