Our apartment has a fascinating view of a flower-filled courtyard

[ambitious-girl]

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I live with my family in a 120-square-meter spacious three-bedroom apartment which is perfectly situated in a quiet street in the XYZ area, where I grew up, which is famous for its beautiful, large park. Our apartment has a fascinating view of a flower-filled courtyard from the living room's floor to ceiling windows so that we can enjoy sunrises and sunsets as well as feeling the sunbeams streaming in.

 

[tedmc]

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I live with my family in a 120-square-meter spacious, three-bedroom apartment which is perfectly situated in a quiet street in the XYZ area where I grew up. [STRIKE]which[/STRIKE] The area is famous for its beautiful, large park. Our apartment has a fascinating view of a flower-filled courtyard from the living room[STRIKE]'s floor to ceiling[/STRIKE] through full-height windows, so that we can enjoy sunrises and sunsets as well as feel[STRIKE]ing [/STRIKE]the sunbeams streaming in.

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[tedmc]

Our apartment has a fascinating view of a flower-filled courtyard from the living room's floor to ceiling windows..

The view is from the living room and not from the windows. The view can be seen through the windows.