Opinion on Email to journalists

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I am trying to write an email to video game journalists so they will cover my campaign. I would like opinions on how effective you think my email is. Thanks!


Hey NAME,

I've noticed you've written some excellent articles on Sonic the Hedgehog in the past.
The SONIC 3 REMASTERED campaign would be perfect for your readers.

It's been covered by The Guardian, The Daily Star, Cult of Mac and Pocket Arcade.

BACKGROUND:
Remember the critical acclaim Sega received for the remastered mobile versions of Sonic 1, 2 & CD?
These were actually developed by a Sonic fan duo known as Taxman and Stealth.

Their talent was so amazing that Sega took the rare step of making their work official. The duo now have a prototype of Sonic 3 Remastered to complete the Sonic trilogy. We hope our campaign will show Sega there is demand for this game to be released.

FIND OUT MORE:
www.sonic3remastered.com

Please let me know if you need any further information.

Regards,

M.S.
sonic3remastered.com
 
Just change "The SONIC 3 REMASTERED campaign" to "The Sonic 3 Remastered campaign". :)
 
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