Bassim
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- Joined
- Mar 1, 2008
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Bosnian
- Home Country
- Bosnia Herzegovina
- Current Location
- Sweden
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One evening, as Tom was repairing a necklace in his shop, he watched four masked robbers ram a SUV into a jewellery shop on the other side of the street. Everything was happening so fast that Tom was stunned and unable to react. It took them about two minutes to empty the cases and displays before they drove off. Tom was a good friend with the owner of the shop and felt sorry for him. He was an elderly man in his sixties, who had recently lost his wife to cancer. After this robbery, he would probably close his shop for good. This would be too much for anybody. Tom thought it could have been him instead. He shuddered at the possibility of confronting the robbers, who nowadays showed no mercy and not only took everything they could carry but also beat the staff. Tom's shop was equipped with security cameras and the alarm, but the scene he just saw made him feel insecure. He would have to procure a gun as soon as possible. Better to shoot a robber than risk being beaten by him and his cronies.
One evening, as Tom was repairing a necklace in his shop, he watched four masked robbers ram a SUV into a jewellery shop on the other side of the street. Everything was happening so fast that Tom was stunned and unable to react. It took them about two minutes to empty the cases and displays before they drove off. Tom was a good friend with the owner of the shop and felt sorry for him. He was an elderly man in his sixties, who had recently lost his wife to cancer. After this robbery, he would probably close his shop for good. This would be too much for anybody. Tom thought it could have been him instead. He shuddered at the possibility of confronting the robbers, who nowadays showed no mercy and not only took everything they could carry but also beat the staff. Tom's shop was equipped with security cameras and the alarm, but the scene he just saw made him feel insecure. He would have to procure a gun as soon as possible. Better to shoot a robber than risk being beaten by him and his cronies.
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