One day at the metro station a person walked up to me and asked that which side did h

[tufguy]

One day at the metro station a person walked up to me and asked that which side did he have to take the metro from? I told him that he had to take it from the other side. As you know there are two tracks in a metro station. Two metros run on those tracks one for going and one for coming.

Could you please check my sentences?

 

[emsr2d2]

One day, at the metro station, [STRIKE]a person[/STRIKE] someone walked up to me and asked [STRIKE]that[/STRIKE] which [STRIKE]side[/STRIKE] platform [STRIKE]did[/STRIKE] he [STRIKE]have[/STRIKE] had to take the metro from. I told him that he had to take it from the other side. As you know, there are two tracks in a metro station. Two metros run on those tracks - one [STRIKE]for[/STRIKE] going in one direction and one [STRIKE]for[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]coming[/STRIKE] going in the other.

Could you please check my sentences?

See above.