On one of his trips to the Amazon ...

[Dutch Van der]

Have I made any mistakes?

On one of his trips to the Amazon, Mark strayed from the marked path and reached a captivating area with a babbling brook surrounded by lush trails. Along the shore, vines crept over logs creating a unique ambience. Mark stood in awe admiring the sublime scene, prompting him to capture the moment with his camera.

Edit: Where's the "thank button"?

 

[Rover_KE]

Dutch van der, in your first thread you correctly put a sentence you were asking about in the thread title and 'Have I made any mistakes?' in the body of your post.

Since then you have twice made 'Have I made any mistakes?' the title, which is unhelpful. I've changed this thread title for you.

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If you can't see the Thank button, it should appear when you have made ten posts.

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Please post your sentences for correction here in Editing & Writing Topics rather than Ask a Teacher.

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Please address probus by his username and not 'man'.

 

[Dutch Van der]

Well, thanks for walking me through your guidelines, I guess. I'll try to abide by them.
Have you taken a look at my passage? Can you spot any mistakes?

 

[tedmc]

1. I would say "captivating spot", to sound more specific.
2. The side of a brook or river is called the bank.