[Grammar] Ok, let’s see, let’s see, dear Todd, I think it would be appropriate

[Nikitus]

Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"Ok, let’s see, let’s see, dear Todd, I think it would be appropriate to talk about this video, which is the evidence that Kevin after all this years, is still hurt about that sad moment of his life. I believe it would be good that we meet next week to talk about this issue."

Thanks.

 

[teechar]

I see that you asked this question almost a year ago on another forum and got reply.
You should know that we expect our members to tell us if they've posted the same question elsewhere! :-?

http://forum.thefreedictionary.com/...-be-appropriate-to-talk-about-this-video.aspx

 

[Nikitus]

Dear teechar:

I honestly do not remember what I had posted 1 year ago in different forums. If I had remembered it I would not have asked the same question again because http://forum.thefreedictionary.com, like this forum is very good, the forum members are very kind to clarify my mistakes and it been very helpful to teach me rules of english language.

I will try to remember in the future.

Best Regards.