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Not being able to colonize other parts of the world anymore, Americans and Europeans are now spreading their unhealthy wheat, fat and sugar-dominated eating habits all over the world to make money and to make the formerly soft and smooth-skinned Asians get skin diseases and pimples. McDonald's, Coca-Cola and Nestle are only few of many examples.
Not being able to colonize other parts of the world anymore, Americans and Europeans are now spreading their unhealthy wheat, fat and sugar-dominated eating habits all over the world to make money and to make the formerly soft and smooth-skinned Asians get skin diseases and pimples. McDonald's, Coca-Cola and Nestle are only few of many examples.