I'd first like to know if the sentence is correct in the first place, but "...with a slipper" bothers me the most.Which part(s) are you doubtful about?
Our village is now safe because we've been saved by a brave hero who's slain the monstrous evil spider that terrorized our lives with a slipper.
I'm sorry. I don't know what you mean. Everything looks fine on my end.Why does your title not appear in your thread?
Adding that terrorized our lives makes it open to ambiguity in that with a slipper seems now to be modifying terrorized our lives rather than slain the monstrous evil spider.
Our village is now safe because we've been saved by a brave hero who's slain with a slipper the monstrous evil spider that terrorized our lives.
emsr2d2 said:Why does your title not appear in your thread?
I'm sorry. I don't know what you mean. Everything looks fine on my end.
Our village is now safe because we've been saved by a brave hero who's slain the monstrous evil spider with a slipper.
Oh... I thought you meant the title wasn't displayed in the thread at all.Your title was "No evil spider is a match for my slipper". Those should be the words you're asking us about. However, your actual post asked us if this sentence was correct:
The title of your post should have been "Our village is now safe because ..." or something similar.
Would this work?
Our village is now safe because we've been saved by a brave hero who's slain with a slipper the monstrous evil spider that terrorized our lives.
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