JoelThakkar
New member
- Joined
- Dec 17, 2014
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Gujarati
- Home Country
- India
- Current Location
- India
Hello,
I am preparing for IELTS. I wrote my 1st essay today. Please evaluate and provide me your valuable feedback.
P.S : Sorry for my bad handwriting. I am also trying to improve that.
I am preparing for IELTS. I wrote my 1st essay today. Please evaluate and provide me your valuable feedback.
P.S : Sorry for my bad handwriting. I am also trying to improve that.
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