mharis05
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I need a quick suggestion/advise on the correct usage of the following:
The case is, on pressing a certain button on a software, user is given an error message AFTER the button is pressed. I'm being asked which one to choose from the below:
"Instructions are not sent for accounts which are associated to different investment plans than its workplace investing model."
Following is what I suggested, since the message appears AFTER user has pressed the button:
"Instructions were not sent for account(s) which are associated to different plans than their workplace investing model(s)."
Thanks in Advance!![Smile :) :)](data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7)
- Haris
The case is, on pressing a certain button on a software, user is given an error message AFTER the button is pressed. I'm being asked which one to choose from the below:
"Instructions are not sent for accounts which are associated to different investment plans than its workplace investing model."
Following is what I suggested, since the message appears AFTER user has pressed the button:
"Instructions were not sent for account(s) which are associated to different plans than their workplace investing model(s)."
Thanks in Advance!
- Haris
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