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lordjoker

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can some help me rewrite this sentence so it can flow better
The fifteen generation Supreme Pope Benduma is sitting upright in the highest position, the 50-year-old Pope still looked young and vigorous and it is rumored that when he listened to Yelusamu City conclusion, the Pope that never drink unexpectedly drunk several cups.
 
Can somebody help me rewrite this sentence so it flows better?

The fifteenth generation Supreme Pope Benduma is sitting upright in the highest position, the 50-year-old Pope still looking young and vigorous, and it is rumored that when he listened to Yelusamu City conclusion, the Pope that never drank liquor unexpectedly drank several cups of vodka.

You can't just say he drank several cups.
 
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I assume your reader will know what the Yelasuma City conclusion is.
 
Much as I like the image produced by Tarheel's "cups of vodka", we don't generally drink vodka from cups!
 
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