[Grammar] Need help for a sentence, correction (not homework)

[zapan09]

Hey !

I want to post a message on my facebook account about a new set of creation that i make, but I'm not sure it's really correct :

""Hello FB friends !

I need your help

Could you support a fresh new artist ( ME

) !?!

Come discover my new creation of original T-shirts, bags and stuff ! (In exclusive, FB first post

)
: link

I'm a young designer who love fashion and photography, so please comment and share if you like my work (or if you don't ^^ )

P.S : If you share this post, you got a chance to win 2 t-shirt for free

Feel free to contact me about anything, like if you love a design and want more product with it or anything !


Thank you a lot !""


Well that's it, thank you for your help

 

[teechar]

[STRIKE]Hey ! [/STRIKE]
Hello!

Hello zapan09, and welcome to the forum.

I want to post a message on my Facebook page [STRIKE]account[/STRIKE] about a new set of items [STRIKE]creation[/STRIKE] that I [STRIKE]make[/STRIKE] have made, but I'm not sure it's really correct.

"Hello FB friends!

I need your help.

Could you support a fresh new artist (me)?!

Come discover my new creation of original T-shirts, bags and other fashion items! [STRIKE]stuff ![/STRIKE] [STRIKE](In[/STRIKE] (exclusive FB first post)
link

I'm a young designer who loves fashion and photography, so please [STRIKE]comment and[/STRIKE] share and comment if you like my work (or if you don't!).

P.S: If you share this post, you [STRIKE]got[/STRIKE] have a chance [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] of winning two t-shirts. [STRIKE]for free [/STRIKE]

Feel free to contact me about anything, [STRIKE]like[/STRIKE] e.g., if you love a particular design and want to see more products based on it. [STRIKE]with it or anything ![/STRIKE]


Thanks [STRIKE]you[/STRIKE] a lot!"


Well that's it. Thank you for your help.

Good luck with your venture. :up: