[CV] Need assistance to improve wording

[Moreno132]

Hello,

I would like to add this sentence to my CV. Can you please see if the language is good or maybe there are better wording.
Thank you!

Search Techniques and Content Monitoring Instructor- I built a Training program for 'F.O.A.' volunteers, teaching techniques and methods for internet search and content monitoring on the web and social media

 

[tedmc]

Hello,

I would like to add this sentence to my CV. Could you please see if the language is good or maybe there [STRIKE]are[/STRIKE] is better [STRIKE]wording[/STRIKE] a better way to write it?
Thank you!

Search Techniques and Content Monitoring Instructor (Instructions?)
I [STRIKE]built[/STRIKE] have planned a training program for 'F.O.A.' volunteers. It covers teaching techniques and methods for internet search and content monitoring on the web and social media.

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[teechar]

Hello,

I would like to add this sentence to my CV. Can you please see if the language is good or maybe there [STRIKE] are [/STRIKE] is better wording?
Thank you!

Search Techniques and Content Monitoring Instructor - I built a training program for F.O.A. volunteers, that teaches [STRIKE] ing [/STRIKE] techniques and methods for searching the internet [STRIKE] search [/STRIKE] and content monitoring on the Web and social media.

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[Yankee]

Hello,

I would like to add this sentence to my CV. Can you please see if the language is good or maybe there are better wording.
Thank you!

Search Techniques and Content Monitoring Instructor- [STRIKE]I built[/STRIKE] Developed a Training program for 'F.O.A.' volunteers; [STRIKE]teaching[/STRIKE] Taught techniques and methods for internet search and content monitoring on the web and social media

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[teechar]

there are better wording

I'm surprised you, as a teacher, find that acceptable. :shock: