[Grammar] My son hadn't spent a week of his trip

[Nikitus]

Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"My son hadn't spent a week of his trip, when there was an accident and the ship, which was old and had been refurbished, broke in the half. The ship sank and I could never find my son again. I traveled more times than I can remember to the site and spent all the money I had. I could not even give him a funeral like the people because I didn't find his body. After that I decided to live in the street like a hobo."


Thanks.

 

[teechar]

"My son hadn't spent a week [STRIKE]of his trip,[/STRIKE] on that ship when there was an accident and the ship, which was old and had been refurbished, broke in [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] half. The ship sank, and I could never find my son again. I traveled more times than I can remember to the site and spent all the money I had. I could not even give him a funeral like [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] normal people because I [STRIKE]didn't find[/STRIKE] never found his body. After that experience, I decided to live [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] on the streets like a hobo."


Thanks.

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