Are the streets in Manhattan really that narrow? (I have never been there)
You need to add a comma and an article. Try again.
Wouldn't Delhi be a more realistic place for your friend to live?
My friend lives deep inside Chandni chowk so, our cab has to go through narrow streets to drop him. which irritates driver.
My friend lives deep inside Chandni chowk so, our cab has to go through narrow streets to drop him. which irritates driver.
That isn't Manhattan, though. Changing the name of a place to somewhere that isn't the same and doesn't have the same features does not help people understand you.
The phrase "deep inside Manhattan" introduces a new concept to me.
Yes. That phrase works for very old cities with labyrinthine street layouts. It's not well suited to a place with a simple grid layout.
My friend lives in the old part of town. Cab drivers taking him home aren't happy, because they have to drive through very narrow streets.
What if we have say "he lives deep inside a particular place"? I mean what is the replacement for his?
The first comma is misplaced. Put it after "Chowk" (which should be capitalized), not after "so". Place a comma before "which". You have a period there.My friend lives deep inside Chandni chowk so, our cab has to go through narrow streets to drop him. which irritates driver.
I have underlined problems in your post. Please try again.
If you have a question about the English language and would like to ask one of our many English teachers and language experts, please click the button below to let us know: