[Grammar] My Family

[nininaz]

Hello all,

May I ask someone to check the following paragraph for mistakes?

"I come from a relatively large family. In fact, I have a nuclear family of five. I have two sisters but unfortunately no brothers, and I am a middle child. Sometimes I wish I had one brother because I feel that life would be more enjoyable if I had at least one. Anyway, developing strong bond and also holding mutual respects are those that I am very proud to in my family. We often have great time spending with each other, exchanging our information, and sharing our ideas with one other. Furthermore, a deep and real affection have developed between us.

 

[teechar]

Hello all,

May I ask someone to check the following paragraph for mistakes?

"I come from a relatively large family. In fact, [STRIKE]I have[/STRIKE] it's a nuclear family of five. I have two sisters but, unfortunately, no brothers, and I am the middle child. Sometimes, I wish I had one brother because I feel that life would be more enjoyable if I had at least one. Anyway, developing strong bonds and also [STRIKE]holding[/STRIKE] having mutual respect are [STRIKE]those that[/STRIKE] what I am very proud [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] of in my family. We often have a great time [STRIKE]spending[/STRIKE] with each other, exchanging news and gossip, [STRIKE]our information,[/STRIKE] and sharing our ideas with one another. Furthermore, a deep and real affection [STRIKE]have[/STRIKE] has developed between us.

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