My birthday

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newkeenlearner

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Whenever my birthday is approaching, I feel as if I am growing old. This day makes me feel depressed. I will be also thinking about opportunities I have missed, chances I have ruined, and times I have wasted. However, I set some goals and make a resolution to work harder, to do my best, and to make the most of my opportunities by my next birthday.
 
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Whenever my birthday is approaching, I feel as if I am growing old. [STRIKE]This[/STRIKE] That day makes me feel depressed. I will be also thinking about opportunities I have missed, chances I have ruined, and times I have wasted. However, I also try on my birthday to set some goals and make a resolution to work harder, to do my best, and to make the most of my opportunities by my next birthday.
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