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- Jan 17, 2016
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Hi there. Would you please proofread the following text? Any help would be appreciated.
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A few days later, Weifeng and Laohu came over to Jiang’s where he had his clinic for Weifeng’s examination. After asking her some questions to help diagnose her physical condition, he retrieved a box with an old-style stethoscope inside from a shelf on which was many medical instruments. The stethoscope looked the same as the Yu Gu Ren healers used but, was enhanced, by Shan Gu De Ren technology and it could pick up sounds beyond the capability of the Yu Gu Ren version.
Jiang said, “Just sit as still as you can, so that we can listen to your baby’s heartbeat.”
Weifeng did as Jiang wanted and then asked, “Is that tube long enough for me to listen as well? ”
Jiang smiled. “Yes, daughter, it is, but let me find the right place first.”
Jiang placed the diaphragm of the stethoscope on Weifeng’s belly, moving it to various places. Each time he paused to listen. After a short time, Jingying noticed he was only moving it between two positions. “Listen to this.” He said to Jingying.
Jingying put the ear tips into her ears. Jiang moved the diaphragm from one place to another and then mouthed the words. “How did you know?”
Weifeng became impatient. “It’s my stomach, let me listen.”
Jiang looked at Weifeng. “Before you listen, I should tell you both what you’re hearing. Daughter, son, it seems you are having twins.”
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A few days later, Weifeng and Laohu came over to Jiang’s where he had his clinic for Weifeng’s examination. After asking her some questions to help diagnose her physical condition, he retrieved a box with an old-style stethoscope inside from a shelf on which was many medical instruments. The stethoscope looked the same as the Yu Gu Ren healers used but, was enhanced, by Shan Gu De Ren technology and it could pick up sounds beyond the capability of the Yu Gu Ren version.
Jiang said, “Just sit as still as you can, so that we can listen to your baby’s heartbeat.”
Weifeng did as Jiang wanted and then asked, “Is that tube long enough for me to listen as well? ”
Jiang smiled. “Yes, daughter, it is, but let me find the right place first.”
Jiang placed the diaphragm of the stethoscope on Weifeng’s belly, moving it to various places. Each time he paused to listen. After a short time, Jingying noticed he was only moving it between two positions. “Listen to this.” He said to Jingying.
Jingying put the ear tips into her ears. Jiang moved the diaphragm from one place to another and then mouthed the words. “How did you know?”
Weifeng became impatient. “It’s my stomach, let me listen.”
Jiang looked at Weifeng. “Before you listen, I should tell you both what you’re hearing. Daughter, son, it seems you are having twins.”
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