Bassim
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Would you take a look at my sentences and correct my grammar and punctuation?
Maria looked his boss in the eye, on whose whim depended her career. She tried to stay calm, but inside she was trembling with nervousness.
I am wondering if it is also grammatically correct to say:
Maria looked in the eye of his boss, on whose whim depended her career.
Maria looked his boss in the eye, on whose whim depended her career. She tried to stay calm, but inside she was trembling with nervousness.
I am wondering if it is also grammatically correct to say:
Maria looked in the eye of his boss, on whose whim depended her career.