[Essay] Main details for thesis

[ardmore]

Here is the story. I want to write an essay to argue Johnson in the below story is stressful.

Johnson just graduated from college and he got a management job. Within one year, he move his wife and children to a bigger house in a better neighborhood.

I select the below topic and three main details.

Life is stressful for a new manager because there are many difficult new issues to be handled.

• First, Johnson has a difficult time while he is in a management position and he has no experience of it.
• Secondly, Johnson has financial things to handle because of his need.
• Finally, he is busy so that he doesn't have time to worry about other things.

Are the topic and the main details proper? Would you please help me out?

 

[teechar]

seems ok to me

 

[emsr2d2]

It seems [strike]ok[/strike] OK to me.

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