Man_na
New member
- Joined
- Aug 1, 2011
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- Native Language
- Russian
- Home Country
- Latvia
- Current Location
- Latvia
Hello everyone
I'm working on promotional leaflet for potential partners right now. It should be ended with common business phrase like "looking forward to successful cooperation".
But our corrector suggested to use "looking forward to working with you". I'm worried that this could be used if you are writing to potential co-worker not a partner. Additionally he suggested to replace word "cooperation" with "working" everywhere in text - but I'm feeling like "working" is less formal than "cooperation" and doesn't suit promotional texts.
Am I right? What would you suggest?
I'm working on promotional leaflet for potential partners right now. It should be ended with common business phrase like "looking forward to successful cooperation".
But our corrector suggested to use "looking forward to working with you". I'm worried that this could be used if you are writing to potential co-worker not a partner. Additionally he suggested to replace word "cooperation" with "working" everywhere in text - but I'm feeling like "working" is less formal than "cooperation" and doesn't suit promotional texts.
Am I right? What would you suggest?