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Could someone check my essay to see if there is any mistakes?
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Are snap or quickly made decisions necessarily poor decisions?
Snap or quickly made decisions are never the better ones. Although these are so easy to take and seem to be excellent while they are taken in a blink of an eye, they are, in fact, rarely good. The reasons are simple. First, we do not have enough details, which are crucial to a good thinking, to take a decision that are clearly balanced. For instance, a doctor who takes decisions on a whim, without considering all the necessary details before giving a medicine, will, without a doubt, lose his license. Second, feelings prevail on these snap judgments, and where intuition is, rational thoughts are not. Moreover, when we are not at our best shape, the choices that we made on a whim are even worse than those that are thought. To conclude, better decisions on hard choices are always taken when rationality is involved.
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Thank you very much
Could someone check my essay to see if there is any mistakes?
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Are snap or quickly made decisions necessarily poor decisions?
Snap or quickly made decisions are never the better ones. Although these are so easy to take and seem to be excellent while they are taken in a blink of an eye, they are, in fact, rarely good. The reasons are simple. First, we do not have enough details, which are crucial to a good thinking, to take a decision that are clearly balanced. For instance, a doctor who takes decisions on a whim, without considering all the necessary details before giving a medicine, will, without a doubt, lose his license. Second, feelings prevail on these snap judgments, and where intuition is, rational thoughts are not. Moreover, when we are not at our best shape, the choices that we made on a whim are even worse than those that are thought. To conclude, better decisions on hard choices are always taken when rationality is involved.
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Thank you very much
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