[Grammar] letter writing

[guruprasad]

Please correction this letter.


from
guru
bangalore.

To
Rangnath
manager.
sub; agent details

Dear sir,
I am guru. the two agents were used in the legislative assembly election result day. the detail is as follows


anand
agent
900000....
nagraj
agent.
89000......

thanking you sir.

 

[Barb_D]

You need capital letters.
Other than that, I don't understand the letter so I can't offer any advice.

Is it common in your culture to end your letters with "thanking you sir"? Are you sure the person getting the letter is male?