Lawak Ke Der 2015

[Gaya87]

Short Synopsis
Lawak Ke Der 2015 is the fourth installment in the history of the popular comedy show by renowned comedians Harith Iskander, Afdlin Shauki, Douglas Lim & trio Bocey, a nonstop laughs from beginning to end.

Long Synopsis
Lawak Ke Der 2015 is the fourth installment in the history of the popular comedy show directed by distinguished actor/director/producer, Hans Isaac. The show features three major comedians namely Afdlin Shauki, Harith Iskander and Douglas Lim. It is merrier with new faces including Bintang Mencari Bintang comedy trio Bocey, a new stand-up comedian Rayza Mukmin and television personality Sherry Al-Haddad as their guest appearances.

 

[teechar]

Re: Can someone pls check my grammar in these few sentences below?

Short Synopsis
Lawak Ke Der 2015 is the fourth installment in the history of the popular comedy show by renowned comedians Harith Iskander, Afdlin Shauki, Douglas Lim & trio Bocey— a show of nonstop laughs from beginning to end.

Long Synopsis
Lawak Ke Der 2015 is the fourth installment in the history of the popular comedy show directed by distinguished actor/director/producer, Hans Isaac. The show features three major comedians: [STRIKE]namely[/STRIKE] Afdlin Shauki, Harith Iskander and Douglas Lim. It is merrier with new faces including Bintang Mencari Bintang, comedy trio Bocey, a new stand-up comedian Rayza Mukmin and television personality Sherry Al-Haddad [STRIKE]as their[/STRIKE] making guest appearances.

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[Barb_D]

Re: Can someone pls check my grammar in these few sentences below?

You MUST give your threads different titles that reflect the content. You have several threads with the same title.

What is the purpose of all these synposes?

 

[Gaya87]

Re: Can someone pls check my grammar in these few sentences below?

Noted with thanks, Barb_D. I'm very new to this site. I've just recently started writing a blog and posting some movies synopsis. Sometimes I find grammatical difficulty in my writing.

 

[Barb_D]

Re: Can someone pls check my grammar in these few sentences below?

So to confirm, this is your writing for your own pleasure and not in any way related to academic writing or writing for hire?

 

[Gaya87]

Re: Can someone pls check my grammar in these few sentences below?

No Barb, not related to any academic writing. I write just for myself and my own pleasure. And soon, I'm planning to write for IMDB movies.

 

[Barb_D]

Re: Can someone pls check my grammar in these few sentences below?

Thank you for confirming.

 

[emsr2d2]

Re: Can someone pls check my grammar in these few sentences below?

Gaya87, I have changed the thread title of all of your threads so that they are relevant to the specific thread.