alpacinou
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- Sep 30, 2019
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- Iran
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Later that night, John went to Nicole's place. She ran her fingers up and down his body as he ran the brush up and down the canvas. The painting turned out to be spectacular. Once he was back home, he lay on his bed, reminiscing about the evening with Nicole. He felt as though her touch had renewed him; the warmth of her hands still lingered on him.
Later that night, John went to Nicole's place. She ran her fingers up and down his body as he ran the brush up and down the canvas. The painting turned out to be spectacular. Once he was back home, he lay on his bed, reminiscing about the evening with Nicole. He felt as though her touch had renewed him; the warmth of her hands still lingered on him.
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