alpacinou
Key Member
- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
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Later that evening, Jane and Patrick went for a stroll along the beach. A humid wind rustled the palm trees and a ribbon of moonlight sparkled off the ocean. As they walked in silence, the waves splashed on the sand, soaking their sandal-clad feet. The lamps on the beach glowed with a hazy glow, casting their shadows on the beach. Jane stopped, and looked at her shadow mingling with Patrick's. She couldn't help but feel that unlike how their shadows merged in the outside world, there was an invisible wall between their hearts. She let go of his hand, and looked out at the water. "I should go back home, John. Alone." she said into the silence.
Later that evening, Jane and Patrick went for a stroll along the beach. A humid wind rustled the palm trees and a ribbon of moonlight sparkled off the ocean. As they walked in silence, the waves splashed on the sand, soaking their sandal-clad feet. The lamps on the beach glowed with a hazy glow, casting their shadows on the beach. Jane stopped, and looked at her shadow mingling with Patrick's. She couldn't help but feel that unlike how their shadows merged in the outside world, there was an invisible wall between their hearts. She let go of his hand, and looked out at the water. "I should go back home, John. Alone." she said into the silence.
