[Grammar] kindly requested: cover letter grammar and style check

[spc400]

x

 

[tedmc]

dealing with internal and external people of all management levels - what do you mean by that?

to open up the long term service agreement to [STRIKE]negotiation[/STRIKE] negotiate with

I [STRIKE]am [/STRIKE] was born in

May I know what thermal and offshore wind business is ?

not a teacher

 

[spc400]

Hi tedmc,

Thank you for your feedback.

With internal and external people I mean colleagues and counterparties. Perhaps this is a typical example of interference from my native language.

 

[tedmc]

How about: Whilst dealing with colleagues, clients and counterparts of all management levels on a variety of projects...?

You have not answered my question on thermal and offshore wind business. Are they to do with energy sources?

 

[jenny dau]

https://www.usingenglish.com/forum/...seas-Please-read-and-correct-it-for-me-thanks

Please check it for me Mr.tedmc. I'm sorry about this spam I'm going to have Ielts Exam next months. huhu :-?

 

[spc400]

How about: Whilst dealing with colleagues, clients and counterparts of all management levels on a variety of projects...?

You have not answered my question on thermal and offshore wind business. Are they to do with energy sources?[/QUOTE]

Yes

Thank you for your suggestion!