[Grammar] Kevin was walking down the streets.

[Nikitus]

Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"Kevin was walking down the streets. After a few minutes went down the stairs near to his parent's house. He sat in the stairs and listened his special song for a while. After one minute, he stood up and went on.

When he walked outside Ligura Building, an middle age lady was going out of the building. Kevin suspired.


A few streets away, he saw the "sidewalk closed" sign right in front of him, on a big, green, wooden wall that was blocking his way."

Thanks.

 

[teechar]

Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"Kevin was walking down the street, [STRIKE]s. A[/STRIKE] and after a few minutes, he went down the [STRIKE]stairs[/STRIKE] steps near [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] his parents' house. He sat [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] at the bottom of those steps [STRIKE]stairs[/STRIKE] and listened to his special song for a while. Shortly after that, [STRIKE]one minute,[/STRIKE] he stood up and walked [STRIKE]went[/STRIKE] on.

When he [STRIKE]walked[/STRIKE] was outside the Ligura Building, a middle-aged lady was going out of the building. Kevin was surprised. [STRIKE]suspired.[/STRIKE]


A few streets away, he saw the 'sidewalk closed' sign right in front of him, on a big, green, wooden wall that was blocking his way."

Those sentences don't connect well with each other.

 

[Nikitus]

Dear teechar:

First of all, thanks for your answer.

Which sentences do not connect well?

Thanks

 

[teechar]

"... walked on." <------------> "When he was outside, etc."
"Kevin was surprised." <------------> "A few streets away, etc."