alpacinou
Key Member
- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
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Julia stepped out of her room in a graceful gown molded to her body. Leo somehow managed to keep his face straight. Her dress whispered her gorgeousness. She radiated sexuality like a waterfall spouted mist.
"Did I tell you about this dress Leo? I saw yesterday at the mall. It was begging me to buy it, so I did," she said, twirling in the gown.
Julia stepped out of her room in a graceful gown molded to her body. Leo somehow managed to keep his face straight. Her dress whispered her gorgeousness. She radiated sexuality like a waterfall spouted mist.
"Did I tell you about this dress Leo? I saw yesterday at the mall. It was begging me to buy it, so I did," she said, twirling in the gown.